Prefer
Strong Verbs
Examples of
Weak Verbs: All forms of the two most commonly used verbs:
To Be, (is, was,
were) and To Have (has, had)
and also these - Seems,
Hold, Perform, Give, Take, Make
Often Used
With These Endings: nce,
acy, ent, ant, tion, ful, sis
CAMOUFLAGED
VERBS
These sentences, while correct, need to be revised. Please use
strong verbs to shorten them. Use a separate sheet of paper.
1. I would like to make a suggestion that the study be brought to
a conclusion.
2. A careful budget analyst should take a look at all
expenditures.
3. The lawyer was scheduled to perform an examination of the
matter earlier today.
4. She made the decision to have a talk with her secretary before
she left.
5. After making a study of the situation, the analyst made a
report to the Division Chief.
6. He was recently given an award of $ 250 for instituting an
improvement in purchasing
practices in his office.
7. The expert from the Water Control Center achieved purification
of the water.
8. To prevent accidents, they conducted an analysis of safety
standards in the office
and made
recommendations concerning needed changes.
9. Both Mr. Jones and his supervisor are found to be in agreement.
10. The committee made an appraisal of the damage to the vehicle.
11. We must take into consideration the number of people attending
and then
make provisions for a meeting place.
12. The group quickly arrived at the decision to hold daily meetings.